feedback

so there's been a problem with college email and I'm still not sure if the emails I type are sent and if I'm receiving all the email so I thought I put my feedback thing on here.

The title of the project

perfectly flawed

What you are trying to communicate

In this series of self portrait performances I use myself as a subject of the work  which makes me at the same time an object of the gaze. By placing an imperfect male body in a position traditionally reserved for a flawless female form I hope to questions not only the genre of nude photography but also the ideas around ideal body image and masculinity.

What aspects of the project do you think is working

After number of shoots I decided on one one look that I think works best and that's the black and white images on back background and use of the more see through veil. I think this works best and is more 

What aspect of the project you think is not succeeding

I still think the title isn't properly representation of the work.

Also I'm struggling with the artist's statement, putting into words what I'm trying to express. I'm not sure if the explanation that I've written is enough, I don't want to write too much but at the same time I realise it should be enough to help people understand the work.

Format of intended presentation 

A number (possibly 10) of A3 portfolio prints. I think it will work better than a book. Ideally I would be able to make a gallery exhibition of 10 A1 prints but this is beyond my budget.